All Comments on 'To Love and Obey Ch. 04'

I love this story!!! How could you cut it off right then?!?! Really?? Lol who fathered that baby. You're good sir. Your good. You had me at hello. Lol.

Added to the realistic plot and excellent descriptions of sometimes unexpected sex, it all adds up to an outstanding story. Well done!

How did I just know it was going to end there !!!

Lovely well written realistic story.

You had my attention all the way!! Couldn't stop reading.

Can't wait to find out who the father is.

I must congratulate you on your superb story. It's really rare that I check an author if he or she updated their stories but you're one of them. I check every day for a new chapter and finally there it is... only to finish in a massive cliffhanger. You're a cruel, cruel woman. I love it.

Great writing!

Awwwww man just when it was getting to the good part. Please update soon, I love your writing.

god what a cliffhanger. how she could forgive him is beyond me. he punished her for being unfaithful but so was he with numerous women. that's a double standard if i ever saw one.

Just catching up.

Amazing.

Debs

You can't leave it there!!!! Get your ass back to writing!

you can't leave this story here after getting us all into it so deep this story is amazing I could feel the contractions myself and also the mixed emotions of weather the baby is white or black