All Comments on 'To Lust and To Love'

More plz i would like to read more on these 2

because I had a hard time following most of the time. I had to keep stopping because of misused words or tense usage didn't sync with what you were writing about, and it throw off the flow. It was a good basis for a story. Next chapter, read it out loud to make sure it sounds coherent. This will ensure the reader won't have a difficult time understanding your characters or your descriptions of what is going on in your story. You can also have someone else read it for you. A fresh set of eyes have an easier time finding errors than yours alone. Best of luck to you in future stories!

That was an abusive relationship

Someone's deluded