All Comments on 'To Protect and Serve Ch. 09'

Wow, what a cliffhanger. I'm about willing to give up my title after that one. This story is beyond imagination. Keep it up!

Lying on her face in the dirt, DanielKitten's mouth was dry and filled with dust. Her insides hurt and she felt like she was tossed from the saloon like a scene from a old western.A dark shawdow fell over her, she winced, bracing herself for the strike that was inevitable. The shadows owner kept walking, only to come to a stop to pick up a crown lying in the mud.

"Was this yours?" Evil Alpaca said with a wicked smile.

"I guess there's a new sheriff in town."

-T

I'm stuck on the edge of my seat!! Can't wait for the next chapter. You're writing is amazing... as always! :P

This is not about sex any more, is it?

This chapter is so filled with emotions and passion. The charachters you build are very moving and real, and thier motives are so well established, that I can identify with most of them.

And you left me at such a cliff hanger, that the story is going to haunt me for the next few days until (hopfully) I can read the continuation?

AAGGHH! How could you hanging us like that?! Please, please, please update now! Please tell me you're not going to make Shamira become a dead hero?!

You have a habit of creating some of the best characters...Sadie, Red, Eliza... I can't wait for the next chapters in this story.

that was startling but it was VERY GOOD!!!! I hope that the next chapter comes soon!!!!! This hole story is a 100 times infinity!!!!! Great work!!!

I gotta stop reading these things...the suspense can not be good for me. Another great installment. CAN'T WAIT for the next. HURRY UP!!!

Seriously, I will. Just please dont ever stop writing stories like this. You are incredible. I have read every story you have on literotica at least 3 times. Every single story!! This story in particular is quickly becoming one of my favorites. I am a little upset about the cliff hanger but im sure i'll recover. Please hurry with chapter 10.

Please, continue!!! This story is really wonderful!

Again great storyline and characters, you have given such depth to this series. Even halfway through the series, I thought Breathless was still better, but now I'm not so sure. I don't usually read things more than once, but your stories are so good even with the minor errors, I have read them again. I know now that the wait for this new series was definitely worth it. I will be sad when this series concludes, but will have to re-read yet AGAIN your stories to sate the addiction! Well Done and please continue the exceptional work!

I tried to read one chapter a day but I could not do it. Now, that I finished reading what has been submitted, I want some more. Please! Please! Please, finish the story.

As always, your stories are a real pleasure to read, and this one especially so.

THIS IS SO AWESOME!!! It's not every story that can make me squeal in delight, but yours definitly succeed. Wonderful story, GREAT characters, hot scenes... Dude, you are good. You're definitly my favorite. Keep at it.

Thank God this story is already finished! I probably would have had a nervous breakdown if I had to wait on the next chapter!

A nasty end to a great chapter. If I hadn’t already read the story through a couple of times this would bother me more than it still does. Are you planning on posting anything new in the foreseeable future?

Usually stories have the mc rescued before any real damage is done, so it’s good you were unique and different. It was so heartbreaking though!

I was (and still am) hating on Shane for being a d-bag. Admittedly, I don't get the sub mindset either, but for being so incredibly gung ho and belligerently stupid, Shamira almost deserves what's happened to her. I say almost because no one deserves this sort of punishment, but a good humbling and comeuppance was definitely do.

Great story but the sloppy editing and proof reading is a shame.