All Comments on 'To Protect and Serve Ch. 11'
by Evil Alpaca
- 14 Comments
Anonymousover 15 years agoAck! How is a woman suppose to balance work and family? Great post, thanks for sharing it. While I would love to see a great separation between the Lesser and Greater dragons, like behavior, language or sensitivity, I think the number of characters you have developed is mind-boggling.
Anonymousover 15 years agoits 3am again and i am up reading this story please write more about these characters they are so good
rgraham666over 15 years agoThis is so fucking good.
An epic fantasy with a deft human touch. That's damned difficult to do and the Evil One has pulled it off in style.
Well done.
Anonymousover 15 years agowhen "Full Moon Strays" just sort of stopped. But you have surpassed it with THIS story. Wonderful work!
Anonymousover 15 years agoI love your stories and I know everyone has a life to lead to but your killing me making us wait for the next chapter. Great work and I am waiting not so patiently for the next installments. Thanks for all of your hard work on your stories.
skibum86over 15 years agoLike the three am reader, I simply could not stop reading this epic adventure (stayed up ALL night reading). I was enthralled by you other sci-fi & fantasy stories, but I simply can not think of a word to convey the excellence of this story. I hope, no I beg (on hands and knees with puppy dog eyes if need be) that these characters will continue their adventure into the foreseeable future.
PoutineFanover 15 years agoI particularly liked the image put in my head by the last scene... a very amusing visual :) Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agohahaha. Awesome Chapter 4 is awesome!! LOVE your work. I started off reading Doctor Wolf's items, then you came up in a top rated with Strays, been addicted to your work every since!!
Tulipfuzzover 2 years agoWonderful writing. However, the typos and other errors are an aggravating distraction.
FranziskaSissyover 2 years agoAnother 5 star , but again mot enough
Oh and about being butchered like shamira, in real life and not having those self healing aspect, including paralyzed parts is bloody , so thinking about ending a life is a total normal ..... Perfect evilin
FranziskaSissyover 2 years agoAnother 5 star , but again mot enough
Oh and about being butchered like shamira, in real life and not having those self healing aspect, including paralyzed parts is bloody , so thinking about ending a life is a total normal ..... Perfect evilin
