All Comments on 'To Rise Again Ch. 02'

This chapter just pulled you in can't wait to read what is next, but I have to agree with what Eithan said why hasn't River looked for his daughter himself. Does he even know that this woman abandoned his daughter after he left her?? Sorry I am rambling...

Yeah, I got questions, too, but I'm waiting patiently *grin* for the next chapter! ;)

It continues to go well. I'm really excited that it's about werewolves! I just feel like you're rushing for some reason. I guess I'd just say you can maybe slow down, give more details. You mention that he's the alpha but go into no detail. I look forward to learning more about him. I look forward to more. These characters have me intrigued. I'd like to know what River was like before the ex left him. Were they married. I guess just try to answer more questions as you go.

This is going to be good. Don't rush the story though, details please ( unless you are teasing us). Alpha!!! I did not see that coming, can't wait for the next installment.

I like to read "gay" erotica. I can so do without straight sex scenes. Please warn your readers.

I want to apologize for not stating that there would be a scene with "straight" sex in it. I understand that this is under the gay section, but I felt that the scene was needed. I can guarantee that there will be no more M/F action in any of the future chapters.

~MommaB~

The "straight" sex scene in which the young man obviously preferred anal and went home unsatisfied hints at how he has a daughter and yet be gay, where this story will obvoiusly go eventually since it is listed as gay. Let the author write in their own style - sit back - and enjoy the evolution of the story. I intend to !