All Comments on 'To Save a World Ch. 02'
by Nyctophiliac
- 6 Comments
RedRhythmicSerpentover 5 years agoSo much action, it seemed to just fly by. You have left me wanting MORE!
darkdesire230over 5 years agoThere are few stories where I can't wait for the next chapter and this is one of them. Keep up the great work.
Anonymousover 5 years agoExcellent story. cannot wait for the next part. Please continue.
Anonymousover 3 years agoWhy didn't they kill the siblings and mercenary when they had the chance? It was inevitable that they would recover and go on a murderous rage, it would have been smarter to kill them in their sleep as opposed to tying them up
2Readerover 2 years agoLet’s stand around after you were freed and something starts howling and screaming waking everyone up. This is the best time to ask questions
2Readerover 2 years agoThis is hard to read. It’s jumbled a little. Too many words to describe what is taking place. Always have a joke with every thought the boy has. Not funny stuff just corny. Looks it could be a very good story if you will cut through some of it. Give us a straight line to the point for more of it. Oh well. It’s your story
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