All Comments on 'To Take a Chance'

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RealDocRealDocabout 17 years ago
a tender romantic story

Thanks you. What a beautiful story of romance gone right.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
perfection

Absolutely beautiful was there with them every second.

DRSPEAKDRSPEAKabout 17 years ago
FINISH

Great story. Please finish your other stories. I want to see how they end.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Beautifully written

I was struck by the excellence of the writing, a not altogether common feature on this site. Short paragraphs and sentences and a simple but tender story.

I shall read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Like the Splitting of The Red Sea

Beautifuolly and well done. BRAVO!!! There is a Jewish saying that making a match is as difficult as the miracle of G-d splitting the Red Sea (Reed Sea?) in Exodus. The sea would not split and a marriage can't begin unless one is ready to jump in!

I'll make deal with you. You keep writing and I'll keep reading.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 13 years ago
I know that pain

Recently, I broke up with a man of 3 years and I was wondering if it was okay to put my heart back out there for it to be broken....

This story, lets me know that the risk is worth it.....

Wish this story was a little more stretched out, but it was worth it!

Thanks

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