All Comments on 'To the Highest Bidder'

I loved it! So fucking hot! I was half expecting Stephen to come home to find them fucking after being rejected by Miriam once she realized she only wanted to hurt Audrey; she didn't permanently want a middle age, overweight man in her life. He could have been cucked and told to sleep in Dane's room. Five stars and a favorite point!

One hot story! I want to fuck both of them lol.

hope you go with this story, maybe mom has a sister that comes to visit?

Loved the realistIc description of the mom. So often in M/S stories the mom is 37 or 38 with a perfect body having had the son when she was only 18. Refreshing change to read a description of how many women in their 40s look. Much much hotter as a result..

I love the way the story builds. Far more realistic. Love the real mom, imperfect but so desirable.

Five Stars!!! As my mom and I read your story, we both became increasingly aroused. As soon as we finished, we went straight to our bedroom. We quickly stripped off our clothes and were in bed together within seconds.

As a teen it was a fantasy to take my mother in the pool.

This story almost put me there

Keep up the great work

Great buildup and hot porn writing! Would love to see the illustrated version, especially with Mom in her short skirt and heels. I agree with another reader: it IS better to describe older women in a more realistic manner, with a little extra body fat and very hairy pussies. Would love to read about a threeway with Miriam, or maybe even include the husband in sort of conciliatory foursome. The last two pages of this story are some of the most cock-hardening i have read. Great job! Can't wait for the next episode.

Great as always. Well worth the wait. Loved the build up in the first half.

The bidding on story keeps going up! Thanks for a great story.

This is a re-post of someone else's story. It may not of been on here, but this story has been posted before, possibly elshwere. I believe you should have mentioned that in the beginning.

Anonymous accusations of plagiarism. Cowardice and gutlessness. They can go and get f***ed. Loved this story along with all of your other work!! Keep on writing. IT's awesome.

To the anonymous douchebag accusing me of plagiarism. Get your facts straight. It's original. Show me the evidence of your bullshit fake claim. If you don't like my writing just give me your multiple one votes, don't make shit up. I don't delete comments so I'll let yours stand for people to see the idiot you are. Coward.

great read. AND i've never read it before! I think for some ahole to use the word "plagiarism" without any shred of evidence is pretty piss poor. But just forget those butheads and keep writing! lots of fun and very sexy. Just don't wait too long till you post again!

Making accusations without proof or even a name to said story is just that--accusations without merits.

Suppose I said 'Someone saw your dad fucked a goat, but I don't remember who'. How would that make you feel, son-of-a-goatfucker?

I have been to many different erotica sites from literotica to xhamster and I have never seen this story anywhere. So please do not accuse a writer of plagiarism unless you can back up that claim. Keep writing Sunburycd you have great talent.

I've come to expect good, well-written stories from yourself, but this was an opportunity wasted. The grammar was all over the place, with participles instead of verbs almost throughout. Consequently there were so few complete sentences that the flow of the story was utterly ruined for me.

There were commas and apostrophes where there shouldn't have been, and some of the spelling could have been better (although you're nowhere near as bad as most on this site).

I struggled through to the end out of respect for your previous writings, however it didn't get any better. I marked it one star for the story idea only.

I realise these stories are free and it may seem churlish of me to complain, but this story showed a distinct lack of respect towards the reader. Please would you revert to your more customary style with interesting and imaginative stories written in a readable and more correct style of language.

I loved this so much! Just perfect!! And please, ignore the anonymous comment below...

First rate. Thanks.

Outstanding story, I read these stories for the story and how it is projected and told. I am not overly concerned that it is error proof or the grammar and punctuational correctness. For the writer, I want to read his thoughts and feel his emotion in the story, I want to become one with the story. If it is written in haste or over time does not matter, it's how I feel in the end that does, thanks for your writing and keep up the great work................():\

Fast riveting read with risky encounters overtaken by lust for more - and more. Great job, Author.

Hot read! Absolutely loved the fact you described Mom as a natural woman, with a little extra, here and there. It's always better for me, as a reader to try and picture the characters in my mind, and the statuesque woman with the perfect figure, big, unrealistic boobs, and completely waxed body just doesn't do it for me when I'm picturing a mom. Don't get me wrong, that perfect bodied older woman does ring my bell, but the situation has to be right. Who you described here was perfect, at least for me. The fact she had hair in all the right places, only made her that much hotter for me. Huge fan of the 'bush'! Love reading your stories. You keep writing YOUR stories, how you want to write them, and never mind the naysayers. You have fans that really enjoy your work. Thank you for what you do. 5⭐ Rafe

Very well and sensious writing, i am not from english spoken country but, i really like your stories and i am a women, nearly 50 and Love incest between mother and sons, have expe.... and nothing is more beatuyful .

Sorry for my spelling, from Scandinavia.

I encourage you to write more and sensious novells.

Kindly Regards from Marilyn