All Comments on 'To the Last Drop'

Bad ending unless there’s more to come.

There has to consequences for her.

Could happen but not to an UGLY smelly old man.

That was a large waste of time

You need a positive comment.

I thought it was great. As a smelly old man, I’m offended at the comment above. True love and caring don’t care about appearances. I thought you handled her inner turmoil and realizations very well.

5*

Tc

GOOD story realistic. Not everyone is young and beautiful. I always think it's funny haters always are anonymous hide in the shadows.

a LOT of tenderness and love in this one, and that's what i like! My only wish is that she would soften her dislike for his ugliness- she did at one point, then reverted to form. We get it: he's UGLY! She's beautiful. And yet they connected powerfully, cuckolding her husband as a result. He didn't get indignant and angry, just sad that this old man usurped his place in his wife's heart and body. Also: Gramps LOVED her milk while hubby rejected her for it, the FOOL!

A very touching and well written erotica. Liked the portrayal of the old man (not every lover has to be gorgeous and extremely attractive) and found it realistic which was refreshing compared to other stories. The grand grand daughter was also very nicely described (although I found her proportions a little excessive) and clearly sended an erotic female vibe. What I liked the most was the blending of storytelling and erotic action with the right amount of kink on the mix (the lactation was hot).. A caring mother, that changed her views of her grand grand grandpa upon seeing his kind and attentive side. Overall, a great story, will gladly read any other similar future works. If you are open to suggestions, I would really like to read a lesbian dom/sub story with a mature dominant woman (60) and a submissive younger woman (20), who steadily induces lactation to please her master,(if you want more ideas for a possible prompt please reply to the comment in the chat).

Author here. The lesbian dom/sub story you proposed isn't in my wheelhouse. I'm not saying I'm against it, since it would force me to stretch my creative muscles, it's just so far removed from what I write about or enjoy. I'll think on it, no promises, but I'll definitely take your ideas into consideration. Who knows, I might get inspired. Message them to me.

A very well written and love tale between a 84 year old Great Grandpa and his 18 year Great Granddaughter, who is 66 years younger than him. I hope you come up with a continuation to this story, want to see how her husband plays role in their sex life, just an avid watcher of thier love growing along with Great Grandpa's baby growing in his wife's belly or him telling both of them he knows about them and they dont have to be so secret about it so that they can fuck openly infront of him and Great Grandpa continue to drain her breastmilk at nights in their bed while husband sleeping next to them or masturbating , lots and lots of possibilities. Mr author i hope you dont limit this story as one-off tale but come up with future chapters on this

To those critics who say something like this could happen but not with someone who is that old, think about Mr. Alpacino in 80's fucking his young girlfriend who is 29 who is 53 years younger than him. So yeah chances could be less but its possible folks, on top of that its a romantic story which works very well with a incestuous pregnancy

I’m a true fan of your. I love your story please keep writing

Your erotic novels about old men and young women are always great. I'm a male who likes older men, not straight women, but I'm always enjoying your work and I'm always grateful to writers like you. I'll look forward to your works in the future. Thank you.

Dude, this was a fucking great story. I like big tits and the fact that her great great grandpa knocked her up was a good twist. It's got all the stuff I like, big tits, incest, pregnancy, a cuckold, you threw it all in there. Good job. Give us more!

These are my two dark fantasies. A good story well-written.

Really well written, please explore a angle where the old man gets possessive of her and wants to give her more babies and plans things

To my mind, your most well-written and sophisticated story. It cries out for a sequel, even though it's been six months since publication.

Any sequel happening