All Comments on 'To Those Who Wait Ch. 01'

YKN4949, this submission continues in your tradition of great story telling. I also love your ability to switch genres and to keep interesting story lines going. I'm looking forward to the next installments (even though you did spoil the ending at the beginning).

This was just amazing. It just rings so true! I'm so impressed with Holly's bravery for jumping without a net the way she did and I feel every bit of her pain and loss at Lisa's rejection. I am reeling just a little bit and sad that I have to wait for the next two chapters.

Can’t wait for the adult Lisa and holly to get together!

Loved the character development, along with the flash back, fast forward time line. Looking forward to part 2!

Love the story and spot on with the P.S. Who listens to the soundtrack?? I tend not to notice little mistakes ( were there any? ) , and I skip stuff I don't like. You don't get paid to write; I don't get paid to read. Grateful that you write and share.

Fantastic story so far, and the sex was delicious! I cannot wait to read the next chapter!

I love your story

You write beautifully

It speaks about my life

The last chapter ripped my heart out

It resonates with me

Thank you for a great story

Too close to the bone for me

Love

Cris xx

To repeat what I read in some of the other comments, the character development was spot on and the way you started it with the flashbacks and how it developed from there was awesome. SEx scenes were great but they pale compared to your writings very well done

A beautiful start to a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing this. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Wow great description, felt all that

I thought it was well written, not over done, I was so hoping the teen daughter would be a replacement. Nice job, it turned me totally on!