All Comments on 'To Valhalla and Back Ch. 01'

This is really interesting. Please add more soon =3

I read it I enjoyed it I want more I'm interested to see where this is going

Digression instead of discretion was not a good start. The name Slyvie is too close to a real name- Sylvie. Every time I read it, it felt like an error.

Also, Slyvie was treated like a child herself. How is it that she is old enough to feel maternal towards Skadi?

Didn't pull me in but some people liked it.

Just wanted to say thank you for the comments. I noticed that @cantfightfate found a few errors. I went back and fixed what I could find. You've got a good eye! Why didn't I catch those?

Please look forward to my next chapter. It's coming out soon! Have a great week :)

Well written

Strong plot with the beginnings of character development