All Comments on 'To Victoria Go the Spoils Ch. 05'

When Sarah sat on his face he bit her - HARD! She screamed and fell off, knocking Victoria away. He got up and beat Victoria to a pulp and left a bleeding and screaming Sarah on the floor as he dressed and left. You didn't think this through. Just awful.

Anyone who's on this site to rewrite stories that don't conform to their particular interests via the comments option is some sort of demented and depraved buzzkill. It's really appalling how many stories get rewrites in the comments. To anyone who feels the urge to do this: STOP. Don't. Instead, go write your own stories that appeal to your sensibilities and post them! Don't bother tearing down the work others elect to share with us on here.

TMS - please keep writing and disregard the disgruntled ramblings of commenters who don't dare to post tales of their own. Thanks for what you do and please keep this series going! :)