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by Sissyhalo

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FailedscoutFailedscoutover 5 years ago
Exciting Story!

This was an exciting story but the longer that it went on, the more rushed it seemed. Your sentences seemed to get fragmented and names changed from one sentence to another. Still a decent read.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

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