All Comments on 'Today at the Bookstore Pt. 03'

by tstar89

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Keep writing.

I love where this is going. I hope she gets knocked up.

AEisMeAEisMeabout 9 years ago
Eh...

Maybe because it's just not my kink but Jack needs to just shut the fuck up. I mean, I like a good "You're a nasty whore" dirty talk like the next girl but all he ever says is misogynistic shit. She needs to shove a sock in his mouth and let his cock do the talking for him. Also, not to be one of those whiny "This is in the wrong category!?1!" people, but...yeah. It's neither non-con, nor reluct. She's totally all in by this point. You write well and I look forward to more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
keep writing!

i love this so much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellant

I really enjoyed this short series. Please write some more. I would love to see her tagged teamed by Jack and Ethan maybe even a DP more than the double fucking in the first story. Even more like in the first story. Maybe add in some other co-workers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
One of my faves

I was hoping for more Ethan though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Holy hell can I have this job

kerrvinkerrvinalmost 7 years ago
today at the bookstore

oh my I hope you write more parts to this one its smoking hot!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Love it

Fucking love the dirty talk!

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