by tstar89
Maybe because it's just not my kink but Jack needs to just shut the fuck up. I mean, I like a good "You're a nasty whore" dirty talk like the next girl but all he ever says is misogynistic shit. She needs to shove a sock in his mouth and let his cock do the talking for him. Also, not to be one of those whiny "This is in the wrong category!?1!" people, but...yeah. It's neither non-con, nor reluct. She's totally all in by this point. You write well and I look forward to more chapters.
I really enjoyed this short series. Please write some more. I would love to see her tagged teamed by Jack and Ethan maybe even a DP more than the double fucking in the first story. Even more like in the first story. Maybe add in some other co-workers.
oh my I hope you write more parts to this one its smoking hot!!!!!