All Comments on 'Today Was A Slow Day'

This really touched the Lesbian inside of me.

Best description of weather I think I have ever read. There aren't very many who can make the external environment an actual character in a story.

I do wish you had used an editor. Slight errors are always distracting from a story.

---High is not hi

---I had to read the sentence: "Same thing really she thought" three times before I got it. One simple comma would have helped a lot. "Same thing really, she thought" Better yet: "They're really the same thing, she thought" (Implied nouns are always tricky. In a conversation, the speaker's tone and candence make the connection.)

Many of the editors in this circle are excellent. Notice how often some of the best authors praise their editior.

enjoyed that one - could read again and again