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All Comments on 'Tom and Morgan "Growing Together" Ch. 02'

by tcs1963

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BigPopsBigPopsover 5 years ago
developing story well

more soon, please.

tcs1963tcs1963over 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I'll add the next chapter soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You really craft a compelling scene...loved it, but you need to proofread your writing. There are a lot of typos and errors that take away from the flow of the story.

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Just someone who finds it easier to write my fantasies, than keep them locked in my head.