All Comments on 'Tomboy Makeover Pt. 01'

More, please. I love all of this.

Alex has timidly accepted the challenge from her friends, but she seems to be all in. I'd like to see how this continues.

I'm a little curious how Alex could have decided that she is "at least a little bi" if she has no experience making love to a woman. Does that just mean that she is attracted to women? Will this evening's activities shift her more in the lesbian direction? Do her friends just want to play for one night, or will this lead to more? I have many questions and I'd like to see where things go, starting with the remainder of the night.

A five star fun story and well-written too which is always a bonus. These three definitely call for further adventures, perhaps not necessarily on this night but at other times to broaden Alex's experience.

...... story to say the least.

But that is not to say it wasn`t well written and it was certainly erotic :)

Definitely not the "normal" threesome tale, but definitely enjoyable. Well done.

And cute.

I liked all three of the ladies, and the sex was awesome.

this was amazing, je te jure i loved it!

Please continue it, it's intriguing and so exciting to read!

Also, i like how Alex was apprehensive because that makes the story more realistic, yet fun

Very yummy indeed! I do hope that you'll continue this! Thank you!

Dude, this is sweet....more please!

Loved it!

All three ladies are so very sweet and loving. It made me wish that I - heterosexual male Me - was part of their group. I could easily see them developing into a loving threesome.

Wow! Please continue...

I enjoyed reading this, even if it was a little lacking detail in parts, it was hot, but could be lots hotter.

Shame Alex doesn't seem to have much success with men. Then again, fit muscular tomboys with toned abs are appreciated by only those with the finest taste, not by the common plebs. They need more love. Good story.

How nice to see part 2 waiting patiently for me. I feel like I was in the room, believable and descriptive. Alex, "got up to wash her face, and when she returned someone had taken her place." from a song about Cecilia.

I'm jumping right back in with these young damp thighs

A work of firsts.

I don't believe it will be the last. Do Victoria and Sophia have boyfriend's, other girlfriend's maybe it's to soon, but you are setting their pace. Nothing like a group hug.

You have a good library, I looking for some more excitement.

What kind of Twilight Zone ass weirdo dimension does Alex and co. live? Cute Tomboy girls are all the rage! Any man would love a woman with abs, means she’s fit! Heresy I say!