All Comments on 'Tomboy: Terri Hits a Homer'

...to really enjoy a story the reader should feel some empathy/sympathy with at least one of the major characters and I found it difficult to feel anything for either of these two. Okay, a tiny bit of sympathy for the lonely Harmony but I found Terri to be deeply unpleasant, one of nature's born bullies. Nevertheless, the standard of your writing made up a lot for the characters' shortcomings.

I would agree the characters are underdeveloped. Also, agree Terri is a bully, but I don’t mind that about her. I would like to know her backstory, maybe understand why she is a butch bully. Didn’t get the impression she was mean, but not enough character development to tell. I’m curious if this a stand-alone or a series?

Even so, the lesbian sex was pretty hot.

I like the characters just fine, they are both sexy and interesting. Okay she's a tough bitch, but she is hot. The other woman doesn't mind how she is treated.

Great story. I feel the characters are developed sufficiently; This is a short story after all! Loved the progression of their encounter from confrontation to uh... collaboration.