by WittePiet
From the beginning to this point, I have truly enjoyed this story. I hope you continue on from here to let us see how it all ends up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
from the beginning to this far of the story ihave loved it all and read it all.
what happens about toms,luke,olivia's and thier childrens lifes.hope olivia finds a man and marries him and starts a family.
what about sandro and dom?and also tommy and martin's??what about doms two brothers?it would be great to hear if dom's younger (lord)brother comes out to be gay.
and also a son or the two sons of luke and tom come out to be gay.
if this all happen in the continuation of this series or in a new series then it would be more interesting and surprising to read and to find out, this will hook the readers to read more.want to know the lives and college lives of the grandchildren of jon & david. and also of the son of the brother of dom.
the story became more interesting as time passed and will be more if the above inputs are added further in your story. and forgot to tell you i loved the story a lot.
I always appreciate it when I get feedback. Sometimes readers' suggestions help me when I get writer's block. I still get some negative reations, and I'm sure that many people don't like my stories because they are not 100% full of sex.