All Comments on 'Tommy's Special Blend Ch. 01'

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Gamblnluck over 3 years ago

Such a stupid premise it was funny and enjoyable. gave you 4 stars

oldsage_1 over 3 years ago

Great fantasy!

SAGE

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Fun Read !!

Quick & to the point, but still kinda hot!! If there is a second installment, it may get even better if Maria is collecting the samples herself !!

cslt over 3 years ago

Sweet little Quickie!

5 Stars

booty77lover over 3 years ago

very HOT so far thanks

Sex4lf57 about 3 years ago

Hot story. I just wish we had a physical description of the mom and sister. Five stars and a favorite point!

ScottishTexan almost 3 years ago

Too juvenile and silly for me to enjoy it. Moving on to greener pastures.

will_shakespeare over 1 year ago

Love this so far!

Marklynda2 about 1 year ago

A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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My stories and characters are fiction. I wish I could have done all this stuff. The reviews from Anonymous, on the first few, nearly drove me away. Fortunately, some seasoned writers stepped up and warned me to take comments like those with a grain of salt. It helped. I read...

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