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by why4u

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MainlinerMainlineralmost 17 years ago
Don't Waste Your Time

I love good stories, I love Lesbian Stories, I love REAL stories. I stopped after the first few paragraphs. It was poorly written with no plot or continuity

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
give up

Well, if you ever work out basic grammar, sentence structure, plotting, having anything original to say etc., you may think you're a writer, but you'll still be wrong.

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