All Comments on 'Tomorrow's a New Day'

Very good story, but just a little stiff. It’s tough reading in a British accent for five pages, but I couldn’t translate it into American. I did enjoy it very much though.

Nice one

Just wonder if any woman would cheat on such a nice guy for a Jerk ?

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, could have been done in three pages instead of five. Nothing original about the story, but I gave it a 3 just for not being a run of the mill worthless cuck story.

Not horrible not great.

Shouldn't it be "Meeting Kate is the BEST thing that ever happened to me, thanks to Judith's adultery".

Having Judith's adultery be the best instead somehow make the good thing sounds less good.

Good story although it did have a few grammatical errors it was still readable. However, what this has to do with LOVING WIVES is beyond me. Maybe it should be in romance but a cheating wife is not a loving one. Just my point of view.

Outstanding story, well written!

It started out well, but seemed to drag. If I was the author, I'd edit it down to no more than three pages. One thing I would change would be the use of the word "fuck" in court. I don't believe any court would allow that word to be used in the context that it was.

"I'm truly sorry that I was such a self-centred bitch who mistook love for submissiveness, caring for weakness." Seems like a lot of people make this mistake. Solid story.

Wow, there are striking differences between the British and the Scots. Your story proves it. I felt very well entertained. The protagonists convinced me in their description. The story felt right to me. It's definitely one of the best I've read here. Thank you for sharing! 5 ***** !!!

brill

I liked it but Stoney is right, it was at least a page too long. It sort of lost its zeal in page 4, maybe it was Judith's forever confession just dragged. Still damn good.

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5*, Hooyah, Salutes

Not a bad story, satisfying ending. As an attorney, I’ll state that using “fuck” in court in that context would at best be a BIG fine, possibly sanctions, maybe even a bar complaint.

So over the top it ruins it. Cutting off his genitals? Such a vicious crime the police will put massive effort into solving it. His half assed alibi from his girlfriend would be broken. The other guy having his testicle beaten till they were removed? Silly.

There is a decent story in there if you remove the over the top parts.

meh....good guy is a dope....gets screwed over....everything possible in the whole universe now goes right....he get rich...he gets a new better girl........bleh.....

Good story, but too long. A bit hard to believe Judith got away with it for 15 months with all his co-workers knowledge though. Also, the caliber of Judith's payback burn is minimal in contrast to the males.....

Ughhh that was a long hard read. Another LW story where a husband with no clue for a long time suddenly is the smartest guy on the planet and everything goes perfectly including finding the hottest woman to marry and make babies.

Nothing new.

Very nice, well-written story. Some parts lacked a bit of subtlety, but it all worked well. 5/5.

One other thing... No court on earth, and no solicitor, barrister or lawyer, would use the word 'fuck' in a court of law, unless it was used in the context of actual words being spoken. The Sherriff would've warned her the first time, and sanctioned Dawn the second time, she said it.

Agree with some other comments that the story wandered a bit in places, but generally the narrative and character development were good. It would have been nice to understand Judith's thoughts early on, but still good stuff. 4*

As a retired lawyer, it was disappointing that the mc's advocate was using the word 'fuck' as part of her questioning and not as evidence. This would not be tolerated in any of the British Courts.

Aside from this, it was a solid enough story. 3*

Evah-Rheddy

Nice feel good story ,I love a happy ending. The way you wrote the first wife up as a whore and self centered bitch.what gets me why would you have sex with a guy who couldn’t preform and that you would cheat with for a year and a half.

Sorry but by the time I got to the bottom of page one I couldnt slog through any more of this. With everything I sat through to get to that point I knew I would never make it 4 more pages.

Like many stories, it started good but too quickly went the cliche ridden way, especially with the CEO being a total smarmy dickhead. So the excessively over the top structure of that part of the story started my downhill slide on this one.

Aren't Judith's texts enough proof of her infidelity?

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Why are Harvey and Bennett so willing to help Bryant if he's such an asshole?

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Why is she cheating if Bryant is so pahetic?

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"It appears Bryant is not liked anywhere." - Except at work, apparently.

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The condoms and tampons are individually wrapped, putting powder in the machines won't do much.

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Kind of pat with all the pieces falling into place just right.

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@uk_writer_53, "Loving Wives" wives is a bit of a misnomer, most of the wives here aren't very loving, at least to their husbands!

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I agree with Stoney regarding the use of fuck in court.

Well, for a BTB revenge story this was quite a fantastic read. I was ok with everything that was done to everyone except when Adam cut off Bryant's balls and cut his cock. This was a first for me to read and was somewhat shocked that Literotica allowed it to be put in print. Oh, I have read where a guy is beaten up so badly that he ends up in the hospital and may never walk again but this was way over the top for me. I liked the story and in flowed quite well, however there were a few places that bogged down a bit but it did lend to the overall story line. I liked that Judith really seemed to be genuine in her pitch to Adam toward the end. Usually when a woman, or man, is so burned badly, the woman, or man, ends up in the hospital or so broken that it justifies that fact. In rare instances, the woman (or man) really does earn a second chance in life; and in this story Judith does get a good life and a second chance (even with someone else). A really good read (except for the one instance noted).

Bryant is depicted as uniformly unliked, probably even unlikable. Our Hero is depicted as a.skilled and systematically positive person. How the fuck is it that everybody in that company goes out of their way to cover for The AssHole against the nice guy?

3*. probably should be a 1*

Poorly written, meandering tale that is hard to follow though boringly formulaic . I gave up after 4 pages.

as they spell cheque properly.

Oh and plus, you write a damn good story.

Good outline story spoiled by poor writing and OTT revenge. Also the court dialogue was ridiculous, try to at least have a semblance of reality in future writing. 2* for the effort, must do better.

Too long. Didn't need to be 5 pages. Over all good.

@mattenw

"Wow, there are striking differences between the British and the Scots"

The Scottish are British you ignorant boy.

You must have meant the English.....who are also British.

The same English that invented the language you use because the dominated the planet for hundreds of years.

Your jealousy is amusing .

As for the story.

I did not get past page 2.

What on earth would Bennett and the entire staff at that company facilitate Bryant?

The entire story was nonsensical.

I love a good BTB story.

This was not it.

“ but such a fragrant breach of the sanctity of marriage” :-)

It's been a long time since a read a story this weird. The MC is deaf dumb and blind to the extent of being emotionally dysfunctional. The wife Judith takes her husband's kindness and acquiescence as justification for becoming cruel, abusive, humiliating, and his complete emotional and financial enemy. That's the behavior of a sociopath. And while the entire company is aware of the wife's open and flagrant betrayal, for over a year, this doofus knew nothing. And he wants to blame all the shit that came his way because he was too nice and loving. Ridiculous. And then we have a business man acting in a provable and documented way to steal, defraud, and completely abuse not just an employee, but perhaps his most valuable employee, all because of some quirk about jealousy and revenge? Just preposterous.

You realize you spent incredible time and words, pages, detailing his techniques, methods, equipment, allies, locations, and documentation he gathered proving the betrayal and abuse he suffered, yet is wasn't until page 4, and then only a few paragraphs, finally telling us exactly why his loyal loving wife suddenly became his worst hateful enemy: "I saw your niceness as weakness," and, "It was so much fun hurting and betraying you with your worst enemy." So that somehow explains why a previously loving loyal wife became a psychopath?

Nah, it doesn't even pass the smell test. He is the perfect man, the perfect husband, the perfect lover, incredibly intelligent, compassionate, talented, and virtuous, so of course his wife decides to emotionally and financially eviscerate him. And this is the woman he courted and analyzed and evaluated and came to love and marry?

Darwin would say such a dysfunctional specimen deserves to be eliminated from the population, for the good of the gene pool. I hope it turns out Kate got knocked up by a truly intelligent and deserving man. This poltroon does not deserve to reproduce. And if history is any predictor, Kate can have all the children she wants with as many men as she wants and this dumb shit will never know.

Thanks for the effort.

This is directed more to comments. Had a second cousin who was unaware enough that his wife's betrayal resulted in him putting her through college before he found out. Bad? This is worse. It happened to him a second time. 2. I am of Italian descent. I have been raised on advice on how to remove a bastard's genitals. My grandfather gave me an Italian shotgun when I was 13. It was only about 24" long. When I asked what it was for, he told me in case of cuckold which he pronounced as cookoo.

Now to NylonDreams. Try to avoid boilerplate. The story should have ended with court decision. The cheated often DONT end up with hot replacement. The scene with wife's mandatory explanation and apology is extraneous bullshit. Otherwise reasonably good story, if a little long. If the end terminated at court would have dropped 2 useless pages.

Enjoyed your story but the end did drag out a bit. I would never have given into allowing Judith to "explain". Not allowing a cheating wife to "explain" seems about the worst revenge you can get on them.

BTB fantasyland:

1. Business owners behave like fraternity brothers.

2. Main hero gets all the documents and proofs he would ever need.

3. The culprits all fold like cards after just a few questions and admit everything illegal they were doing.

4. All the legal proceedings go to the advantage of the main character.

5. The main character has everybody against him then everybody rooting for him and helping him.

6. He reaps all the monetary benefits, including opening his own company.

7. He does a serious bodily harm to two opposing characters without any revenge or investigation of police.

8. He finds immediate rebound with superfucking and massive orgasms.

I know LW is known for many moronic stories like this one but this is still a preposterous nonsense. No wonder regular BTB audience is all elated to read a total fantasy like this.

Kates affair with Bryant makes no sense, even after explaining herself. You dont waste your time and money on someone who is not even remotely able to satisfy you. But she did it for 15 months. It just doesnt make sense. And his boss doing what he did? How the fuck was he even able to raise his buisness to a successful level if he would do shit like that just for the giggles.

Not a lot of good stuff in LW recently, so I was delighted to find a story rated 4.35.

I read it. All of it. It's bad. As in really bad!

The comments generally seem to agree with me.

So how did it get such a high rating. I think we should be told.

Garbage. A fantasy for BTB crowd who are the easiest to satisfy due to their low IQ.

Incidentally, talking of low IQ; the Scottish are British, as are the English and Welsh.

3 pages too long Mr perfect was cheated on got divorced, compensation and revenge. Hot woman who helps him ends up in his bed. The end.

Much better story by you. I really enjoyed it.

4/5

Should have posted this in Fantasy, not a shred of anything remotely real to it. Just jack off material for betas.

As was said below, the way the wife acts makes no sense, the way the business people act doesn’t make much sense, and how the main character goes from happy and clueless to full on Chuck Norris seems unrealistic. The actual writing isn’t bad, but the plot lines and the characters need quite a bit of work.

Fragrant or fLagrant???

5 stars - 1. Great story. However I love a good revenge story with physical pay back an etcetera included. When you cut off the twig and berries, that was to much. 🤷‍♂️ The reason for the - 1 star.

Another fairy tale for angry divorced men.

Meh.

Do I love a good and happy ending? Yes, I do! And this is a brilliant one. It is always so gratifying when, after the bitch gets burned, the husband meets someone who takes away the blues and makes him even happier. She puts him in a new realm and lets him sees and feel heaven. Thanks for writing and sharing. I LIKE IT VERUY MUCH - FULL MARKS 10-Stars!

Loved it

On one level this was a very likeable tale. A man horribly betrayed and mistreated for 15 months wife and work peers discovers truth, breaks loose, and remedies matters.

On another, this is oversold. The awfulness at home and at work would not take 15 months to decipher, nor to find intolerable. Then suddenly in a few hours and days, he sorts it all out and sets a course correction--per divorce, resignation, bank accounts, divorce, everything. But this is not enough for author, no he must add the laxative chocolates & scratch powder at work (for which he was somehow not arrested). And much later, after sorting the divorce & work settlements hugely in his favor, that too was not adequate--and he resorts to permanent damage to 2 guy's "equipment". Why pray tell was ex-wife left free of his parading rage?

By that time, I was exhausted with this. But I read on. And found our "hero" in a lovely new romance and having great sex blah blah blah. Why would we wanna trust this guy with a nice new woman: One, given that he was clueless for 15 months; two, when finding he's been mistreated, is not content with tilting things back in his favor; three, no he must exact horrific revenge as well? No amount of patter about his being a good employee and a good guy should overlook that this guy is a passive-aggressive time-bomb.

A little over the top, wasn't it? And that magic witness stand where you can't help incriminating yourself, come on. Not to speak about cutting a penis with a hot blade. How do you even do that? Are penises made of styrofoam?

Also, one has to assume Judith didnt wear engagement ring? How convenient. Maybe should explain why she’s not wearing her ring.

Vacillating between 3 and 4 stars.

Predictable story line. Unimpressive characters. Way too long and drawn out. This won’t be placed on my favorite list. Sorry.

Contrary to some comments , I enjoyed the story. I hope to enjoy more from this author. LP

Great story well presented (jaybee186)

I believe this is the third time i ever rated a story as excelent. Truly fine job. A pleasure to read. Thank you.

ZEROZEROZERO.

Would have been a FIVE until you started that old "you have to let her explain" bullshit. Every time the author does that the protagonist becomes pathetic cuck - no matter how many balls he cuts off.

I thought this was an excellent story. 5stars

Cute and I enjoyed it, but way, way, way over the top.

0 star - no matter how well written a story is (this one would have gotten a 4) - if there is violence of any form - I usually assign a 0 star rating.

This author needs help. He’s so fixated on cutting off people’s genitals or destroying them. Psycho

The language used in the court would be unacceptable in a Scottish Court. The lawyer would have said something like- she had sexual relations - no that she funked him.

Again, a bit long for my taste. The story could have been told in 3 pages but still enjoyable. 4 stars

Great story. Brutal in places, but not out of line.

Ed

Really enjoyed the story. Thanks for all your efforts.

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Though the cutting off of the guys balls was a bit much

nixrox, stop being such a complete, bleeding libtarded pussy.

Other than allowing the slut to apologize AND giving her the earrings, it was a good effort. The slut didn't deserve closure.

Awesome story, one of the best. It had great elements and a happy ending for the narrator.

Decent story but the last two pages were boring.

@BGMAG, Don't critique NIXROX too hard after all it's all in his name NIX=NO(0) ROX= ROCKS(CAJONES). LP

reminded me of a saddletramp story..really good except the 'lived happily ever after' part too long

nice work overall..5 stars!

⭐⭐⭐⭐ A good story, with a lot of thought behind it. But, it probably should have been two chapters. The first three pages cover the discovery and revenge very well. The remaining two pages weren't nearly as interesting, and just prolong a story that's already ended.

Nice story, but I disliked (and largely skipped) the talk Judith requested with Adam. It seemed artificial and all it added to the story was the background of Kate's concern and Adam proposing to her-but that background would have been there without actually setting out the conversation.

I have come to believe asking why is a waste of time. There is no excuse for cheating on a faithful spouse.

If your spouse refuses to have sex with you, divorce them and find someone else, unless it is medically related.

DO NOT CHEAT!

This is the Author's best work IMHO. Solid 5 stars.

Good story.

Did they not enforce the prenup when they got divorced?!

Skanks father and brother seem like thugs!

Judith was either mentally damaged or delusional or both. While the author is making it clear that Judith is being honest (at least how she sees the truth), her explanation on page 4 is wholly unrealistic and suggests she doesn't know what love is. Why she would humiliate her husband (but in fact really only herself) when her husband doesn't know (though he does) is just perplexing. And continuing a tawdry affair with a guy who is a resoundingly shitty lover just because of the thrill of doing it behind her husband's back with his nemesis is perverted. So yeah mentally deranged. Strange story.

I would think some of the actions done by his employer were so bad they would get criminal charges not just civil. Probably wrong but man they were really really bad.

Is this satire?

lol SWAMP DONKEY!!!!! haha

Your trouble is you have word Diarrhea! You just keep running on and on.

Better to kepy short and sweet than to make it long and BORING!!!!

So she cheats, humiliates him, steals from him, denies him sex, treats him like total shit, pathologically betrays him with his personal enemy and ends up with a transfer and a diamond jewelry set? The male cheaters are horribly injured and maimed? They deserved that, I loved the way they suffered but she basically gets paid to act the way she did. Again the female suffers zero consequences for her behavior.

pathetic... I thought a trial was about a lawyer asking relevant questions which had to be answered by the witness?

This trial was a relentless rant with never a hint of legal questioning.

Great story! I liked it!!

Damn, enough is enough. I started to gag. Two pages could have sufficed for this crap.

The writing style is too melodic, too frantic. I couldn't finish the first page.

Yup she is a dirtball pig alright 😄

I liked it thru the divorce and Bennet's court cases. Photos at the church was a nice touch, LOL. All the sex with Kate got boring.

i liked it kate was great judath a bitch

If you are going to include a courtroom scene to the story it might be a good idea for the lawyers to sound less like they ply their trade in a barrack room. Unless it’s done very tongue in cheek it just comes across as a bit ignorant.

How sweet

It's a great story and well written I'll giving it 5⭐ on paper but in my mind I am giving it 3.14⭐ I will never be able get the time I invested for your story so I bid you Adieu....

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Excellent story. Very well written so I'm following now! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thanks.

The story is very well written. I like the way Kate was included in the story. It has a nice progression in life as averse to a sudden replacement story like many authors seem to do. I gave it 4 stras instead of 5 because of the sudden shift from Judith to Fate in the story. It appears to be 2 stories joined in one. The sex episodes with Kate is too much as well. Thank you for sharing your talent.