All Comments on 'Tom's Revenge'

and make her suck you dick through aluminum foil

Another yawn-inducing, cookie cutter snoozefest from an overrated writer.

Bob either writes a good one or a totally ridiculous one....this is the latter.

Who would be crazy enough to let his ex-wife live under the same roof ? You might die in your sleep with a knife in your back. Nutso ending.

What sense it makes to blackmail in the end? Not just that she can simply cut "Tom"'s throat after he did what he did but she may also be a cesspool of STDs after that gangbang. Jeez, another one of stupid absurdities from JPB's dreamland.

I didn't like the bitch, but having her raped is too much. Not a good one Bob.

I hope his "wants" were suitably perverted and that he filmed them and they lasted days, weeks, months and years.

Poor story - rape, because that's what it was, MC should have been arrested, author is the real pervert here

Tom needs to spend the next 20 years "enjoying" the same thing he did to his ex-, but his cellmate wouldn't need the drugs.

Heartless destruction, they both need tazered a lot. Both act childish.

Pinishment fits the crime.

JPB is one seriously brain damaged dipshit.

And thats his better quality

Plebian... no punch...no real emotion...nada...and worst of all...no real denouement... an average story at best...with no discernable panache... to put it in basic bubba....IT'S BORING!!!

3 stars and that's being nice...

Tom is a first class arsehole,his revenge was down right nasty and way over the top.He was as much to blame for his marriage breaking up as was his wife.

One star for the contempt this kind of story should merit. Facilitating date rape? Now there's a topic from a twisted mind.

Not traceable back to him? All she had to do was go to the police.

Medical tests and bar/security cameras would do the rest.

Another unfinished JPB story.

It was good revenge until the end. But who would take her in and live with her? Unless all he wants to do is something mean and nasty.

Swell revenge, but a bit restrained.

I would have identified the man in the photo, and videoed him with Phil and the boys as they castrated him with a chainsaw. Force her to view it, THEN LET THE FUN BEGIN!

If you are twisted, go the distance.

He's just a pathetic fucking wanker

Rather surprised that JPB would write a story about a woman being drugged and gang raped, especially with no consequences for the perpetrators. Hope this isn't going to be a regular thing.

Awful !!

Yeah, the punishment fit the crime. She denied him thoroughly while blaming him for being a degenerate for wanting to do normal things, was cruel afterwards by not only doing it but by sending him a picture of it then was open to doing things with anybody else. A dirty conniving whore.

JPB comments prove that you can't please everybody anytime.

Well written, as usual. The story one sucked. No tags but I could have read the reviews, my bad.

Date rape drugs are NEVER EVER justified. Well written as usual from JPB. However the use of the drugs invalidated the revenge no matter how justified.

well that was a waste of time. sorry i read it.

1 star - I do not care what she did to him, but the moment he put a drug in her drink - he should be spending the rest of his life in jail. That ended this story for me and probably anything you have submitted.