All Comments on 'Tongue-Tied'

by Swampcooler

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BBeinhartBBeinhartover 3 years ago
Hot!

What a great story! Curiously respectful in treating its characters and their motivations. ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love it

Great story

Loved her sexual reawakening

I saw the twist coming but it didnโ€™t matter. This is the first of your stories Iโ€™ve read but not the last

Thanks

49WIZARD8849WIZARD88over 3 years ago

Good to see Swampcooler back!! And back to show these fools how it's done. Great story

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 3 years ago

Loved it! Hope to see more from the Swamp master in the near future!! Five stars and a favorite point!

TeenStudforOlderWomenTeenStudforOlderWomenover 3 years ago
Great Story!!!

I enjoyed this hot story!! I plan to read your other stories as well.

Thanks for taking the time to write in such great detail.

tennesseeredtennesseeredover 3 years ago
Well-written but some quibbles

I couldn't make the connection between a dormant twenty year old affair and how viciously Renata reacted. Why was she so hateful toward her husband right from the get go? Owen's and Leah's affair was long-dead and old history. Owen seemed overly passive and underdeveloped as a character. Making Renata's lover her husband's biological son was a clever twist. Kinky, actually.

There is no DNA in hair clippings cut with scissors. The sample must include the hair bulb, the growing part of the hair, in order to harvest DNA. With all the semen Dylan was slinging about, that would have seemed the more logical choice.

Even so and grading on the curve, this is a solid five star effort. Thanks, SC.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is not in the Hall Of Fame yet? That's a bunch of bullshit. Swampcooler knocked it out of the park with this one. Renata has every right do what she did. She was lied to for twenty years. Hell, Dylan was lied to as well. Awesome fucking story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Brilliant

Please donโ€™t drain the swamp, Swampcooler! Keep filling it up with your erotic tales. Iโ€™ve been imagining what I would do if I found out my wife had been fucking my best friend off and on for 20 years and Iโ€™d be pissed off too just like Renata

Great story great twist and anxiously waiting for your next

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not bad

she will only be ruined and never be happy. fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Twist in the tale.

Marvellous story, about the best I've read on here this year. No quibling about spelling and grammar and how realistic it is, or is not. Entertaining in every way, 5/5!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Just a suggestion: attach the "long tongue" tag to this.

Great story! Love stories where a young guy loves to lick a pussy all the way.

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