All Comments on 'Tony's Tale Ch. 02'

Fantastic series you've created, hopefully there is another part and if so can't wait to read it.

best ever story

Absolutely magnificent. No other comment seems appropriate. Congratulations for this so warm and human love story. G.Belgium.

Pure Romance. Very erotic without being explicit. Celine

had me worried for a while.

Thank you for a great story, and thanks for entertaining us.

Mike from Texas

Congratulations. An outstanding piece of work. Very good prose and compelling images. I am envious.

Coaster

A truly wonderful and compelling story of romance.

Kuddos Author, you did exceptionally well in your first submission.

Summit

I noticed you've been reading my work, so thought I'd check out yours. I reckon you've got real talent apollona! I especially like your humour and dialogue, especially between the boys - you've got a real knack for those. I just LOVED the conversation between Peter and Tony in the hospital about seducing Peter's wife - brilliant! And the other thing you do well that so many people don't manage is leaving stuff unsaid. Like when he finds Christine in bed with all those blokes, you don't take us through a labourious description of what he sees when he opens the door - instead it gets revealed in the course of the subsequent action which is great. Keep writing!

I enjoyed both these stories very much. I'm glad Tony woke up to himself!

Great writing, Apollona. Your characters came across as warm, likeable and realistic. The dialogue flowed easily and was very well done. A wonderful ending to a heart-warming tale.

I missed this one.

For me, maybe a little too much detail, not required for the story, like the whole sister in law conversation, and maybe too much emotion surrounding the widow's twin sister, but it was over all, a very enjoyable read.

Few stories get a 5 star mark, but this one is worth it, I think.

Thanks,

I am surprised that no one has commented before this.

If you are still around it would ba a pleasure to read more of your thoughts.

That was bloody great. You gave us a great story

I especially liked your Antipodean colour.

The two chapters in this story seemed to wander all over the place, but came together in a nice conclusion.

loved it...