by blackfen
This was a good story until you got to the double penetration part. I'm all in favor of mother and son fucking and ever son and aunt fucking but the double penetration part is more cruelty than pleasure. I have fucked both my mother and sister many, many times and have fucked each one after another on the same bed but had no desire to have my sister's boyfriend or my younger brother join in the act.
There was some parts you could have left out such as bringing the the aunt and nephew in full time that and using the word bitch you could have also made the kids dick more of a believable size I mean really 12 inches come on that made it very un realistic
to use rude and degrading terms such as bitch as a term of endearment.
Wat an amazing fuck.... I am really looking forward to this with some milf
Amazing incest.. Want more of such stories
My favorite story on the site. Great use of tension buildup and release. Like great music!
Had to stop because the dialogue is terrible. Like, honest to godness atrocious.
Do you realize you switch their names around - often? It pulls the reader from the story to mentally correct the couplings. It would be fantastic, if that was not the case, but as it stands I doubt I would take the trouble to re-read it.
And a story as great as this one attracts great comments. I love the comment by the mother who wrote "wow." She and her son have done oral but stopped short at that. But oral sex between a mother and her boy is already a wonderful thing. Imagine, a boy jams his head between his own mother's thighs where he last was maybe 18 or 20 years before. He sees in all its glory the lovely hairy hole he came out of, the best thing a son can ever see. He inhales the sharp musky aroma wafting up to his nostrils, the best thing he can ever smell. Then the boy kisses and smooches and slurps his own mother's cunt half to death, maybe slipping a couple of fingers inside just to say hello to his own birth canal. As for his mother, she has her own boy's big hard cock right in front of her. When he was a little kid, she used to call it his little pippy, and they'd giggle together. Well, her son's pippy ain't so little any more, and mom's bursting with pride over her darling boy's fat throbbing cock and his heavy loaded balls. Mom cums on her son's greedy mouth, covering his face with her juices, and her boy blows his balls in his mother's mouth, shooting her a huge dose of his creamy semen. The dear lady admits that they're "weakening," which is very good news. Ma'am, follow your instincts--welcome your boy's hard young cock up your warm wet twat as you both desire. Your twat, ma'am, is where your son's cock and all the semen in his young balls belong.
Well told . I really enjoyed it ! 5***** s as usual .
Thanks for the story
Tx Cracker
That is A Wonderful work .. keep it going ... i was reading for 10 hours .. and i cum over 6 times ...
Over many, many years - this is one of the VERY BEST porn stories that I can recall. Truly a masterful piece of work.
I just re-read this ( been months) and I realised that this writing is actually very good. I read for the content and it is there but the sentences and images are actually very good! I don't think I have ever commented on that in a story on here. Good yes, but never good enough to get its own comment.
Congratulations
This is a very good story. I've also read all your other stories several times. This one gave up a bit of intensity as the sister and nephew got involved in the large-cocked, DP's during the last two pages. Of coarse that does not ruin the story whatsoever. A sexy female (with nice healthy tits) who gets very turned on while sucking cock and swallowing cum is just great. Your charecter also craves ass fucking and double penatrations... nice. Feel free to write more stories, maybe start a whole new series?
Wish you would have made several chapters - as you said at the start. On this website, you can search a story by Chapters but not by pages. Making a story 15 pages long is just inconsiderate of the author, imho. Good story if you can overlook that and the exceptional wordiness. Please next time chapters not pages.
stories like this are great...you should check out Shoguy. her stories feature huge sons who are rreally confident and the absolute sexiest moms that love to dress reat hot! check her tories out and keep writing. awsome dude
I read and came quite alot and since my cock is 7inches long and im only 16. I took a risk and sent this link to my mum before going college then when i came home i took my bag off then my mum said come here i was so nervous. I walked in the room and she was in stockings then she undressed me and sucked me off and fucked the life out of me.
This story makes me want to fuck my mom. I came 5 times reading it
What an utterly fantastic story, so much mother and son action, from both Moms. The story was awesome right from the beginning but got even better when the sisters decided to swap sons and get double fucked, cunt and ass. One of the best stories on Lit.
Definitely an awesome stroke story. Not particularly plot driven, but a very entertaining read indeed. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work!
i wanted to cum after the first few pages, got halfway and couldnt hold it in any more. very sexily written, what a fantasy.
Keep up the good work...despite the so-called critics with their negativity!
Is there any way you could break the story in chapters...I didn't have the will to start reading when I realized how long it is....
39 - 21 = 18. You know if you're going to bitch at least get you're facts straight. Not to defend every piece of drivel that ends up on this site but the author did say that his stories were not about believability. If you're looking for Shelly, Keats or Dickens you're on the wrong site. The mom was married at 18 her son was 13 when she divorced and she would've been 21 when he was born.
Keep up the good work and thanks for the read.
Even though they did swap and have double penetration, I liked that they still wanted to be with their own son, and their sons wanted to be with their own mother.
I made it sweeter that the love between mother and son was still what they wanted the most.
Thanks for the good read.
Awesome. The double mother/son sex is great. A little more lesbian sex here would have been appreciated. Not full on lesbian but expending the two sisters licking their sons cum of each other scene.
I will read your other stories.
In my case It reminded me alot of my own step mom and I together, I loved it and other than a few changes it is close to what happened with me.
Thankyou for a well written story.
G.E.
This story was NOT repetitious. What it was is very well crafted and carefully written with vivid description and natural, easygoing dialogue. I'd give anything if I could have had this with my mother. Your eroticism was perfect! It never got old or stale. Now I'd like to see a second chapter in which Son knocks up Mom. Excellent story. AnHoa Rifleman
This is most likely the very best story I've ever read on Lit. It even surpasses some of the fabulous work of klrxo, and he's one of the very best! Each chapter was better than the one before, and I'm so happy that it culminated in a huge fuck-fest between the mothers and sons. Huge cocks, huge tits, really hard fucking scenes, swapping Moms and lots of anal action, could it be any better, I doubt it! I'd love there to be some more of this.
At three times during the story you accidentally
called Tyler by the name Jake. Just and editing oops.
Other wise I loved it. 5*
Fantastic! I will be rereading this for a few days! Eyes rolled back into my head... blowing massive loads until my nuts run dry.
yes yes, every thing is so hot , my son and i do lots but we have agreed not to fuck just oral for last 2 yrs but we are both getting weak i think
why must evry good incest story get ruined with it goin from a SECRET LOVE to a family fuckfest that just makes it cheap and whorish
Must be annoying when a bunch of anonymous individuals slag off about your work.
I think your story is super, like the way you pen your words. I would love to read next chapter. thanks bud
Dude, everyone's entitled to their own view and while some may not like your story, I thought it fucking rocked!! Too repetitive? Fuck that - it was pitch perfect my friend! Love your stuff and hope you carry on writing more like this!
At least 1000 stories. You might be a great writer but get some new material and say more with less. Sorry no rating here.