All Comments on 'Too Clever by a Mile Ch. 06'

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roller_girl06roller_girl06about 12 years ago
i like the story!

Waiting for chapter 7 I am enjoying reading this story!

madmonkey2madmonkey2about 12 years ago

Is this really a turnabout or just the logical result of Steve's rather bizarre and poorly planned out attempt at domination?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Paedophile

Oh my god, the author is most probably lusting sfter his own 12 year old brown haired, flat chested daughter. A paedophile. Someone remove this piece of crap and put it in bdsm pr paedophilia section. Don't insult romance

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Getting a little better.

I still think Steve needs a serious ass kicking but this chapter was better.

I like women in school uniforms and maid outfits as well! LOL!

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

I love lovestories between characters that have their fair share of flaws. Much easier to engage with a character that feels human. Keep it up!

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