All Comments on 'Too Clever by a Mile Ch. 09'

by carvohi

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madmonkey2madmonkey2almost 12 years ago

An interesting conclusion. Graphic but not at all graphic in the way erotica usually is. I think your work might be moving away from this genre. Maybe you should try posting these somewhere that has wider readership.

dawid1501dawid1501almost 12 years ago
MMMM

I think I missed a chapter here. They went to the Hypnotist show and the she had the baby. Cannot find the missing chapter . But overall very good one. Emotional.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
What happened to chapter 8?

Ch 08 as posted was a duplicate of Ch 07

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hey!!!!?

Chapter 8!!!???!!!

Pussy_WhispererPussy_Whispererover 2 years ago

I liked the series but i found the twist of letting his lesbian friend rub up his fiance to not make sense. No matter who says it saying something like hey you can rub her up and make her supper aroused as a joke sounds super weird and inappropriate to put your partner in a position that they can be compromised does not sound reasonable

It would almost require an extra chapter to justify..

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