by Whitesocks
I liked your story a lot and -- to me at least -- it opened the door to an eternal fantasy, that of taking the experience and chuzpe of a 45-year-old, who knows the lines and buttons, and transfer it back into an 18-year-old body, young, athletic, with a really big dick. Your story reminded me of several occasions where I could have had sex, also with women considerably older than me, if I had been just a little less nervous and a little more direct.
Your story was well written. I enjoy such stories that read as if they could easily have really happened. I especially enjoyed the humor and I enjoyed the scenes of the young man really liking the older woman - not just the sex.
The sister thing, a little weird, as it's not really my bag. But the romance and seduction between these two...magnifique.
A great job, one of the best on LIT. Your sense of humor and plot, along with a real gift for dialogue, combine to make for great entertainment and first rate stroking. Bravo Zulu!
This is both sexy and the funniest thing I've read in years!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please write more.
"You are a very interesting though somewhat tactless young man.". -- this undoubtedly describes the author too.
Witty. Hot. Well-developed characters.
Being tactless is an acquired skill...unfortunately your technique doesn't come to me often when I need to get laid. You are a tactless wit...& clearly, not hung like a hamster! Brilliant...please continue until the cab driver tosses you out the window!
a very realistic story. i hope there is a follow up story.well done
Completely agree with kalodin (titled: Top Notch).
Laughed my way through another Whitesocks tale.
Thank you so much.
Paul in Oklahoma