All Comments on 'Too Drunk'

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McMahonSMcMahonSabout 9 years ago
Tease

Miss Applegate YOU are a tease. I gave you only three stars because you are at least two if not three pages missing for a conclusion at this pace if intending a short and the same distance adrift of a first chapter ending if planning to develop this which I would seek to encourage you to do.

Weekend_WarriorWeekend_Warriorabout 9 years ago
A sequel

A part II?.... Oh Man!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
good short stories

end in precisely the place where this one did. You have an interesting style.

TommybowlerTommybowleralmost 9 years ago
Just read both stories you have posted, to date

Very interesting writing style. I like it and you have me intrigued. I hope there are more stories to come.

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