All Comments on 'Too Long'

I thought that was so great will there be a continuance to this story another chapter or is this it ?

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

Excellent job of capturing the feelings of the characters. Also, nice description of the passions without crude language. As a male, I really liked the way the woman was treated with tenderness and respect. The cunnilingus idea was great! Looking forward to more from you.

I whole-heartedly agree that this was a really well written story that took its time in developing the characters and the sexual situation that they found themselves.

There was a great sense of intimacy and shared passion expressed in the build up to their lovemaking, which was eventually voiced in the young man's rather adult concern about his partner's state of fertility.

My only suggestion would be to use just as much wonderful detail in describing their actual physical intercourse.

Good Job,

*****Nice and Hot read with a good storyline. Could have been a good series. Thanks for sharing.