All Comments on 'Too Many Secrets'

An actual story that wasnt 'just' smut. I actually got attached to the story. Well written, grammatical corrections here and there, but who cares.

Great story, all the right stuff in all the right proportions, the successes, tragedy, character development and story flow all felt great. Keep up the good work!

Very nicely done. The rapid shifts in the narrative from first person to third gave me pause until I realized what you were up to. My reaction was, "CLEVERGIRL". This is one of the better stories I've come across here and makes weeding through lesser stories worth it.

A very good story, the only blight was the reference to "socialists". As outside the USA they are right of centre politicians! I hope you return with more stories in this universe.

When a writer lets their imagination run wild but held closely with reins on certain boundaries then a great story unfolds. Your last sci-fi piece was very good, but this ranks among my top five. I probably have read over a thousand (no exaggeration) sci-fi stories and this I could not put own. When the reader is caught up with the story and then becomes part of it then the author has achieved their goal. Thank you for a very,very good read. ( I now have read all your stories and this is the best).

Ry

Another one of your incredible stories I couldn't stop reading until the end and the mix of sc-fi and your other topics is a delight...Thank You

Great story! A parallel to the anti-trans legislation passing in so many states right now? Loved the intrigue, the world-building, and the (probably honest) take of what would happen to mutants, given the current political climate.

Thanks for sharing your talent!

Gave your non-trans stories another look (though sunburned is still GOAT, continue that one, ideally with a detour to the trans section ;) ), and this one is the first one that caught my eye.

It's really good, though as a fan of your trans stories I wish it had more of Connie's escapades too :P But even so it was hot and the setting and the plot were quite interesting, though again as a long time fan I could easily see the twist coming. FWIW I think it would be harder for fresh readers ;)

Looking forward to more from you, as always.