by shakna
Part of me wants you to move this along so fast, and part wants the story to go on and on. This epic fantasy and truly great. Fantastic. Thanks for sharing this with us.
The 'hes and shes' are sometimes hard to follow and the word usage of Tammy can at times be confusing, and i often don't like this type of story but love this. I honestly care for Toofy, Sai and all those of the House of Sai. I can't wait for the next installment.
Hey, hey, the gang's all here. It should be an interesting breakfast. π§ π₯ π³ π₯
I love the multi page chapters of this story. Lets you get into the story more than most do and makes the wait for the next chapter all the more frustrating. π Wonder if there is any relation between Tammy and the goddess of mischief? Both kitsunes but that may be of no consequence. Or mother/daughter? Soon to be a pregnant dragon π along with a pregnant orc and would be funny if a pregnant kitsune as well. Toofy is going to be pissed off on one hand and maybe feel left out on the other? Surprise ending for Daen. Wonder if he was able to give Toofy kittens before becoming a dragon happy meal and aphrodisiac all in one? LOL
Hmm. Some editing errors in this chapter, but it's still a great story.
I really love Toofy as a character. I'm just so sad that everyone she cares about is taken from her or is sacrificed as a means to an end. I hope she achieves what she wants but it doesn't irrevocably damage her soul or maybe that's the cost of great things.
Cheers