All Comments on 'Topsy Turvy Ch. 04'

Hi, very nice story! Thanks!

He hasn't done Mom yet. Lots of options for this story.

There are more story lines to be written here. What happens at the next family get together at mom's, especialy since she has not joined in YET. Will either of the sisters or Darlene become pregnant?

Please continue.

Please more chapters. This is such a great story line. :-)

Please don't leave us hanging like this. Write more!

It is your story, many brothers and sisters use thos words with their siblings, expecially Sis. My Sis is 80 and I still call her that sometimes. This was a very hot story and I appreciated it, keep up the good work.

Way too short.

One of the best stories on here, brilliant !

So damn frustrating !

What a shame there wasn’t any more

5/5

@Rapier875, 'one of the best stories on here'? What a joke...

Anon - you have your opinion, I have mine.

Why is my opinion apparently wrong ?

Rapier

I know it be some years since you had done this story. But I wish you had some more chapters. I even thought you were going to add the mother after that put about the bad storm.