This story is utterly enchanting, the depth of characters and their interaction is brilliant. I do hope you’re planning to publish, I’d love to know more about the world they live in.
Constructive criticism and suggestions are always welcome. Please do bear in mind it takes a little time to get things edited and approved! (0 currently pending) Flower Wine, Torgan Wine, and Kros Voyeh all take place in the same world. As far as events go, the order is Flowe...