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But sex happens altogether too fast. Boom! Blowjob. Boom. Boom.Boom

No buildup. No teasing. Nothing with her breasts.

Could have been a winner. Gave it 3 stars.

This story was a gift for a friend, that I did in one stretch over a decent few hours. I admit on reflection that I had become exhausted and thus cut out considerable build up scenes (including a whole dinner scene). I’m posting it here for you to enjoy and to gain feedback, and if it is well received, would probably commit to a story comprising several chapters.

With this in mind, feel free to let me know whether you’d be interested. Regards.

Very well written! I love this time era where simple things can make you a slut. I love the end when it turns out it was her room all along!! Haha and she probably realizes that she didn’t have to put out or anything cause she was never in the wrong. A little more build up would have been nice but overall I don’t think it was too fast. It might have made it more realistic if she was a little scared because I’m assuming she hasn’t don’t something like that before. Especially anal!! She prob just have struggled more and refused her anal passage. But I thought it was good and gave it 5 stars ⭐️

I really enjoyed this and would like to read more for sure.