All Comments on 'Tori's Restaurant Love'

Good story but some lapses in language were distracting - - - Was/were etc.

I liked the story and how it was told. Good characters, dialog and descriptions. However, you used "was" a bunch of times when the correct word would have been "were". As noted above by the previous poster, it was distracting as the narrative pace was thrown off with the error. Please keep writing but have someone check it for such errors before posting.

Good short story!