All Comments on 'Touch Ch. 03'

Very, very good. Starting with some excelent soul-searching and ending with incredibly hot scenes. Keep it up!

I'll go and read chapter 4 now ;)

OMG i cant stress enough how pissed you have made me. I got so connected with these characters and you just end everything like that? That is truly messed up. I can't stop thinking about this ending and its realllyyy pissing me off. I truly enjoyed the first few chapters but you just really killed this story with that ending. IM. SO. FREAKIN. PISSED!!!

You put the words together right. Read 3 chapters. I couldnt read all 3. It goes on and on. Run on sentences. To much i cant. I wont. Im sorry. I dont know why i read that much of it.

the series is so repetitive and who could stand to be with such a screwed-up girl like this.

The story became all about her insecurities & crying & whining. I’d like to see them deal with the real outside world.

became silly ... too damn long getting to the point with too many artificial reasons to reverse any progress the two of them had made ... you're good at representing passion ... don't mess it up with stuff that doesn't work at all

Ok. By the end of page 7, I hate Jason.