All Comments on 'Touch Me Ch. 01'

by 12shadesofred

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fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
Paranoia us your best friend...

...So Pay Attention!!!

12sor, good start to what could develop into a classic Lesbian version of the Loving Wife's genre.

I can see a couple (of any gender combo) agreeing to dual celibacy. Usually for medical reasons or spiritual development. But the decision must be made in mutual understanding.

To this point of the storyline, the author has not provided any specific reason for the character of Alex to make a unilateral fiat.

If this was an LW story, it would turn out the dominate partner was cheating on the submissive partner. That Alex was deliberately mindfucking with Zoey.

Wouldn't be surprised if A insists Z start wearing a chastity belt.

As this writer is a woman, I presume she intends to develop this storyline in directions I have failed to foresee.

Eagerly awaiting developments or collapse of this relationship.

elusiouselusiousover 9 years ago

I'm enjoying the character and storyline development. :D Looking forward to more!

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 9 years ago
Please

Great story, even greater potential. Hope you continue, please ...

Randee2058Randee2058over 7 years ago
Wishing

I enjoyed this wishing for the 2 nd installment.5 🌟

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