by SilverDawn
Very intrigued. I have not read touched by lightning so I'm very curious to find what exactly a sacred maiden is.
Love the way this story is developing... Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Are they really so caught up in, 'saving the other from the pain,' that they don't notice how shitty they are being? Hmmm!!! I'm on the edge if my seat..... I want to shake them both and scream at them to wake up and take a chance...
I read Kissed by Lightning, and found your writing style and descriptive abilities to be good, but the plot, and particularly the ending wholly unsatisfactory.
I have tried this continuation, and again like your style, but not the plot. Unfortunately I just don't like or have any sympathy with the main characters. You said in your introduction that things would get more positive. I wish you all the best, but it has taken too long to get to anything remotely positive in your writing so far, so I wont be reading any more.
Please don't leave us dangling for long. I loved KBL and now am intrigued by TBM. I hope Katrina's affection is reciprocated.
I try to be patient but always end up getting impatient, especially when it's a good story. I love a good love story and I love your characters so please continue add quick as you can get them finished. :)
It's absolutely amazing! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
I really hope you will be continuing with this story soon! It's is absolutely exquisite!!!