All Comments on 'Touched Pt. 02'

by neotoy

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Jennifer182Jennifer182almost 2 years ago

OMG absolutely awesome. what a fantastically told story. rates way more than 5 stars.

I would love to see more chapters of these two beautifully described characters.

Thank You Neotoy

AliceGeeAliceGeealmost 2 years ago

If eroticism is what you were aiming for then I must say that you have achieved it in spades. This was very hot and very, very arousing and I hope Part 3 will not be long in coming because I am so curious as to what further adventures Christine has planned for Catherine

neotoyneotoyalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks @Jennifer182 I just submitted Pt. 03 and there's still another 16,000 words I haven't edited yet and the story is probably about half way finished. Glad you're enjoying it :)

chiefhalchiefhalalmost 2 years ago

This such a hot, gripping story. I'm loving it!

ReesertonReesertonalmost 2 years ago

Interested to see where this is headed. How long can the relationship last? Christine did imply that it would be over when she “went home”. Will Christine become more than her domme? Will Catherine have some kind of emotional epiphany about her relationship with Henry? She seems to be realizing her attraction to other women and her period of greatest physical satisfaction is with someone other than her husband. So many loose ends!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

beautifully written!

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