All Comments on 'Tour Guides'

So well written and so wonderfully erotic. The scene is great and the characters come alive; and the sex is hot!

Great--please give us more.

Its me Pam, Susan. Hope I didn't blow it. Pam

Oh Susan, such a wonderful story! The dance, the building passion, the climatic mmmmm. Wonderfully done. Amy

A perfect New York evening, and great chemistry between you and Mari. I would have loved to see Mari get *slightly* more aggressive/dominant/kinky, but that's my own narrow preference. You held a beautiful balance in the story between the sex and the wordplay. There's a fine, magic line there. I don't know how to define it, but I know that "too literate", and "too purely sexual" don't work. Wherever that line is, this DID work...pretty words and pretty sex in a delicate balance. It really pulled me in. Thank you.