All Comments on 'Town Cop'

by lovestowrite

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gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
a good one

A good loving wife story, well written, nicely done. If their was a second chapter it would show Charley is going to be a daddy

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
TRUE LOVE STORY

what a beautiful husband & wife love story.im sure charlie is a good pussy eater & u are a good cock sucker.....next chapter reads baby on the way......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
a little quickly

The story evolved rather quickly... and it was a little weird that so much was capitalized... The Type of dinner they were eating, the High School Sweethearts, it just bothered me as I was reading... But the story itself wasn't bad

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