All Comments on 'Tracking Evil, a Podcast Pt. 05'

Great chapter as always!

More Arlene please.

Your skills as a writer and story teller never cease to amaze me. Keep it up. I am really invested in the story as much as i am in the sex and the characters.

Another excellent chapter, intriguing to see them chasing the killer and her sexual experiences. It was just a matter of time before she was made airtight. Don't know how many more chapters you have in mind for this story, but looking forward reading them. It would be nice if there was a situation where she got all dressed up, the dress, stockings, and heels. Keep up the excellent writing.

I'm starting to think the series will end with an all out gangbang of Erica and Arlene. At least i seriously hope! Proper climax no pun intented :) Love the direction of the story and the mistery.

THE THELMA & LOUISE OF TRUE DETECTIVE EROTIC MYSTERY!

Another excellent entry of interracial crime erotism done right, along with excellent characterization on the characters " black on white cliches '' in this fantastic interracial gem

I definitely need more Arlene POV., as best right hand wingwoman cop detective (MILF) friend & ace reporter Erica on the elusive Butterman killer suspect on the loose.

it looks like Erica & Arlene are going to need more it seems on next hiking adventure in the woods. Hahaha!

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It’s been pretty good but this last chapter has it now veering off the rails. Erica and Arlene getting some joy from black cocks is fine, but the mindless slavish compulsion is taking things past credibility. Flushing her birth control down the toilet because she now feels a need for a baby fathered by a black man, any black man, is bonkersville and the admirable young woman you started with has become a twisted caricature. Enjoying the taboo nature and size of big black cock can be erotic. Keeping a story at least somewhat realistic is what can make it good. Sorry, you’ve not kept it there. Instead of a turn on your story has become a yawner.

Incredible chapter. I would really like if Erica gets to experience multiple penetrations in one hole. Kind of like 1 cock in her pussy and two up her ass. Other than good job as always!

I know you went back and changed the size of Erica's bust. You missed a key spot: 1st chapter introductory 3rd paragraph her measurements are listed as 34C-25-36.

Thanks @Thrillherbryson, that was a good spot. I will take more care to avoid continuity errors like that in the future.