All Comments on 'Trading Control for Love Pt. 01'

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AnnaValley11AnnaValley113 months ago

What a fascinating tale.

Hoping there is more to come

Thank you

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc3 months ago

Hard to really believe such a pretentious life experience really exists, at least in the US, but your solid writing makes it believable. I hope in future chapters she can change her perspective and learn to appreciate life to its fullest. 4.8*

SlithyToveSlithyTove3 months ago

Really different, rather like peeking in on medieval courtship, and oddly compelling.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Interesting beginning! I look forward to the next chapter!

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