All Comments on 'Traditions Ch. 01'

Super good start. I love the Gypsies shows on TLC , the UK and the American versions. I've totally been waiting for someone to do a story. I'm so excited to read more of this story ! Please update soon ! :D

I can't wait to read more

I think you did a great job for your first submission! Keep up the great work, and post more soon!

Promising debut.

Five.

Very nice. I'm loving these characters. Don't worry about finding an editor you'll find one, but your story has me hooked. Great job!

Biggup to the newbies!!! ;)

I see someones been inspiried by a certain series on channel 4. ;). Great story, this always was a 'what if' subject for me aswell. Keep up the good work.

Well done and accurate. Please update soon.

Thank you for bringing something different; please continue :-).

The term "gipping" stems from, gypsy, its a slur word derogatory to gypsies, I found it strange that you would use it in a story centering around them and their culture, but it is a good story and very insightful, good work!

very nice start and the timing is great with the new gypsy shows on tv now.

I agree with another commenter. It's great to get a story with a unique cultural aspect to it. I've always thought of gypsies as interesting. I didn't realize there was such a negative stigma attached to them as a people. It's just plain silly if you ask me. Anyway, this is great! More please!

This is a great story I hope u can update it soon

Can't wait to see what happens next. Though I'm a little confused, where is the story taking place?

Lovely story. I look forward to reading more.

I can’t say that I have come across a story like this before on Lit so my interest and curiosity is definitely piqued in wanting to read more about these two. Though for a Texas girl I was expecting Cheyanne more fesity especially after that "bitch" slip Declan did...lol I can’t say that I know too much about the Gypsy culture and lifestyle so that in and of itself makes me want to know where you are going with this story. Keep up the great work and can’t wait for more!

love the characters, its a very hot beginning!

can't wait till more!

Very Interesting beginning. Can't wait to read more.

Nice, it's interesting that you introduced the gympies, didn't know much about them. Its new, I would say, to see interacial doesn't limits, it's expand, you did that. Good job. Also don't be like other writers that take too long to update. This is very new and lovely to me, nice job.

I really like your story. The whole twist with gypsies and interracial relationships is so interesting. Plus we get to learn a little about Irish travelers. Really excited about this story. Please post more chapters quickly, good job!

I actually have been watching a reality tv series about Gypsies and they call non-travelers "gorgers" so when you write the next time you could use that. I think your story is really good. I love your characters and their make-up of differences. I can't wait to read more in this series. Thanks

Awesome... Love it so far! Great population pick! Can't wait

to see where it goes from here!

the best story I've read on here in a long time, please keep it up!

Great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I just started reading this story. I'm enjoying how it is unfolding.

Cute story!

I had to stop reading.

Get an editor, or at least a proof-reader.

I think I need me an Irish Traveler LOL. Great story so far... there a few editing errors that make you have to read a line to understand what should be there but other than that, I like the way you write some words for accent sake and helps me here the voice of the character. Nicely done.

I really enjoyed this first chapter very much. So nice and refreshing to touch upon a story that gives insight into a different world and culture like the travelling people.

Great job and I didn't mind the the small grammatical stuff, I was too involved in learning about the main characters being introduced :) Some people are just born with the ability to weave a story. You have that talent.

Loved it and looking forward to reading more :)

You really going to leave your purse on the table without someone watching it? Stupid girls but great story!!!!

Don't read any more of the storyline; this author doesn't finish the novel.

You desperately need an editor

i think i will like this story, please keep it going. Yes you need a proof reader because of the errors, but its still a good story!