by JANAMARIE
Your description of the various sex scenes,your character developemnt,the overall flow of the piece and the humor you threw in made this story one of the best ever. PLEASE keep writing.
Unlike many of the other stories on here that are totally unbelievable, yours is down to earth and had me wishing I had a trailer in that park.
My problem is trying to find a word to describe your writing. Realistic dialog, so descriptive that the characters are still seen in my mind as I write this. In a word, "WOW!"
A truly excellent story ... I too loved the character development. Thank you, Regards, Michael
A truly excellent story ... I too loved the character development. Thank you, Regards, Michael
Very realistic - easy to imagine either one of them being in that position.