All Comments on 'Trailer Tracey'

Gentle little love story. 5⛤

The farmer takes a husband!

5

The farmer takes a husband!

5

A romance of the best kind - thank you for writing a beautifully believable tale which hits the spot in every way

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The beginning was sad, with what happened to him and how people treated him through no fault of his own.

The end was like a bright summers morning listening to the bird song and feeling all is well with life. Thank you.

5 stars and a fav. Andy

Life is like a jig-saw puzzle. Those funny looking pieces sometimes fit together just right. It just takes time to try out each piece and make it fit where it belongs. 5*

Very nice!

An excellent start on your second hundred posted stories. Thank you for sharing with us.

So one leg was a little short ... but he was long on love and life !

Nice job. You created characters that the reader would love to meet. 5*

Excellent story, well paced and great plot. Not sure if you planned this as a stand-alone or will add more chapters either way it works. Keep going mate

Well written story with good narrative flow, The plot was a bit simplistic, but sometimes that's a good thing. 4*

You give us all hope for a happy ending. Very nice.

Great romantic story. 5stars

I so enjoyed how you drew them talking with each other and later planning together, really finding out about each other. 5

Wonderful really life story. I always said a young man needs a mature woman to set him straight. Five stars

Ahem.

"The best laid schemes o' Mice an' Men. Gang aft agley, . . . ", Robert Burns. Yes, you find it misquoted everywhere, but if he read the poem in a book he should know better.

Tracey may be underestimating the time & labor needed to raise a baby; they may need to find another hired hand to live in that little camper. Or maybe not; in historical times, many women had babies while working & kept on. (Many of the babies died, of course, for many reasons.)

Excellent story, BTW. Definitely 5*.

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"The best laid schemes o' Mice an' Men. Gang aft agley, . . . ", Robert Burns. Yes, you find it misquoted everywhere, but if he read the poem in a book he should know better.<br>

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Tracey may be underestimating the time & labor needed to raise a baby; they may need to find another hired hand to live in that little camper. Or maybe not; in historical times, many women had babies while working & kept on. (Many of the babies died, of course, for many reasons.)<br>

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Excellent story, BTW. Definitely 5*.

Very nice story, very well told - only at the end for my taste a little (too) short : The story could have continued just a little longer !

Nevertheless 5/5 stars !

The author knows how to write Romance. Read, enjoy!

Excellent story of the start of a young adult's life.

I am sympathetic with his appreciation for how a woman's body changes with maturity and child-bearing.

A touch more eroticism would be nice

Five for you

aieesssh so enjoyed ur story Im always surprised n amazed how this genre rips away exposes raw sensitive secrets wishes feelings often im dazed in a sad or warm stupor yep know its fanciful -wadda wadda but no other genre comes even close to generating such intense deep seated responses seemed to end too soon maybe there is a longer unabridged version or Chapter 2 .. .. Thank you 4 the experience 1st story of urs i read will look 4 more

i always make my 1stcomment b4 reading others so pleased i didnt c any v negative maybe they werent shown saw many asking 4 more .. .. {my following comment isnt related 2 any i read in particular but somehow was reminded of what i at least perceive 2 b a ?fault ?mistake in so many offerings 1 encounters} but so wonderful to read story of ordinary ppl not wealthy not setup 4 life cruising thru wout issues just ordinary folk workg hard battlers this category is idealist by nature but that can b over done becoming too ott cheesy liked drawn 2 n by the down to earth humility