by haremgirl
I can't wait till the surely happy ending for two good people!
I hope the road there won't involve too much trouble and danger, or misunderstanding, as they seem to be made for each other.
John
i just found the story i think its great had to go back and read the frist parts of it buz
this story can go anywere you want it to just off the start that is differant than most start good job
A lot of hard work and thought has gone into this, you have impressed me, I need to read the next part, keep it up, you tell a charming and compelling tale.
Peter
enjoyable and well written, thank you for sharing your stories with us. keep up the good work and hope you and yours have a very merry christmas respectfully fan in Texas
Very well-written with strong character development, heightening tension, and well-researched setting descriptions...
Wow!!!
You could interest the Hallmark channel to make this story into a movie. What I wouldn't do to see this tale come alive on TV. Please, please create a tale set in 21st century too !
omg, i am soooo obsessed with liam!!!!! thank god this story is finished and i can read it all the way through. who cares that it's already 2 am? not i!!
you tantalize, tease and tempt us with what is yet to be...and I'm loving it! Your finely spun web of words is the best I've read in a long, long time. Take care...
I think that says it all about Selena. Women didn't have it easy along the Oregon Trail. It's easy for us to read about the journey, but many of us probably wouldn't have survived the trip. I think Selena will be a survivor.
This series is a total joy to read so far. Looking forward to the next chapters. Being a western fan, I find it funny this writer spent so few words on the weapons carried on a 2,000 mile wagon trip through hostile territory. "One shotgun & one rifle", would not be enough, for a man that had done the trip before. Five stars!