All Comments on 'Trailing Home Ch. 08'

What a hot chapter! There seems to be danger lurking at every bend of the road.

Boyd

Thank You for puting it all up at onece, not making us wait long with cliffhangers like last time!

John

keep up the great work. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

You really are a talented write, Haremgirl.

Thank you for a fantastic story.

Quit your dayjob, this is where your talent lies.

Sounds like Selena is becoming completely acclimated to the call of the wild.

Your writing is excellent.

The first 7 ch were too boring without the passionate sex, now you talking.. good at last........

I bought the spanking, but the rest of that scene was gratuitous abuse with a bunch psycho babble to support it. Whose trigger were you tripping there, your readers or yours?

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The rest of it has been pretty good.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

You write too well to be doing anything else. Go pro with writing and keep thinking up more stories for us. You're a real gem.

You write too well to be doing anything else. Go pro with writing and keep thinking up more stories for us. You're a real gem.

Traveling west was fraught with danger during the days of the Oregon Trail. You've done a great job portraying the way the pioneers spent their time on the trail and the hazards they faced as they made their way to Oregon.

With a story as interesting as this, and the excellent writing, I'm surprised that there haven't been any comments for the past 4-1/2 years.

It's been said, you write like a pro.

The last lines sound as the foreboding of more danger to come.